My work so far...Mock up's

This was my first mock-up.
I couldnt find any proper pictures of a teenage girl and tis girl looks younger. I think this was a good attempt because it depicts the whole of London going under the water because of climate change. One thing I could have improved on was that i could have put hints of the causes of climate change eg, spray cans
I like this one better, because it is very vivid
It does not really target the audience I was going for.